After school I went straight home with my brother and my Dad. When I got home I went and did my homework. Then my dad told me that my cousin went to Poly Fest with his Mum and aunties. The Poly Fest was held in Manukau.
While they were gone, I went to play with his ball. When they came back from Poly Fest, they said to us "We have to wait for the result tomorrow. While we were waiting for the result to come the next day, out we went to visit my Dad's first cousins who played for the Roosters.
We visited his Dad and Mum because his son was going to play for another team in the NRL. Then out of the blue, we all heard a text coming from my cousin's ipad to say that they had won the stick dance and the other group came in second place.
We all jumped up into the air and we hugged him saying,"You did good!" It was late by the time we went home that was when we remembered that my brother missed out on his friend's birthday party. The following day was Sunday and it was my birthday.
The first one to say Happy birthday to me was my brother. After that, I went to the kitchen with my aunt, uncle, cousin and my mum and dad. They all said happy birthday to me and then we went to church to receive our blessing from the priest.
I went home and my aunty went shopping for some food for my birthday. When they came back, they set up the food and I thanked them for buying the food for us all. I felt really happy because it was wonderful to be surrounded by my loving family and eating delicious food together.
Learning intention: We are learning to write a recount.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I group my ideas about my weekend into clear paragraphs.
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