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Showing posts with label Persuade. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Persuade. Show all posts

Friday, 4 December 2015

Homework! yes or no?

Homework! Yes or No

Children should be given homework because it is important.I think it is important because it helps us to learn about lots of things and it makes us become smart. When we go to college we could answer all the question that the teacher ask.It can fill our brain with good information.

Sometimes when we get home ,we are tired and we just want to watch TV, play games, play outside or go shopping.Besides, homework is very tiring to do. But, I believe that children should have homework because it will make us the brainy people in the world. 

L.I-WALT write a persuasive writing to persuade my leader about my argument.

Monday, 9 November 2015

Captured By Aliens!!!!

Captured By Aliens

I got captured by ugly and scary monsters.When they touched me I got electric shock and my hair all went up.I felt very scared!. Then they asked me a question about earth: How is earth? Is earth wonderful or not? I told them lies because they plan to come to earth and destroy it. 

I said, "It is really horrible on earth, it is full of poisonous gas, crabs come out of the walls, rats are as tall as a door and they eat monster heads.Volcano blows up every day".They let me go and I walked away. 

I ran into the red light in Jupiter to get into my rocket ship.I saw a lightning and heard a strange sound from the sky as I flew back to earth. I told everybody that there are aliens in Jupiter.They look like green and slimy electrifying creatures that when you touch them, you will get electric shock or you get electrocuted.

Wednesday, 5 August 2015

How Could a Friend Be Better

I believe a friend could be better by not telling lies. A friend could be better by helping their friend get up when they fall down. 

A friend could be better by not gossiping when the teacher is talking.A friend could be better by not getting mad or angry, because they could hurt me. 

The most important way a friend could be better is by sharing each others toy.

Thursday, 30 July 2015

How could adults be better?

I believe adults could be better if they don't fight. I believe adults could be better if they listen to kids,because they will talk about something important. Adults should stop smoking in the house, because the kids will get sick.

Adults should stop smacking kids in the public, because I'll be embarrassed. The most important way adults could be better is by helping us in our learning.